Hey Daisy,I'm Jasel and I attend Glenbrae School. I came across this poster and it caught my eye instantly because of the title and the picture you added. Once I read your poem about your trampoline, I was amazed. This tells me a lot about your trampoline, the scent,the texture and how bouncy it is. It seems like a fun trampoline, keep up the great work Daisy.
Thank you for this brilliant feedback.You seem really good at comments,me im not so good.How did it catch your eye? Was it the colour? Title?.And yes it is a fun trampoline.Thanks Daisy
Hello Daisy my name is Taijah from Glenbrae school and I really enjoyed reading your blog post about your trampoline:) wow keep up the really great work.
- this piece of writing was pretty small but still made me a bit happy. Trampolines is one of the first things I go on when I'm told to go outside. Great work !!
Hello Daisy I am a year 7 student at Glenbrae School. I really like this blog post you have published about your Trampoline. Are Trampolines your favorite thing to play on or do you have other fun things you like to do. Keep up the great work.
Hello Daisy, I'm Tiara from Glenbrae school This is an amazing piece of work presented by you based on trampolines. It makes your trampoline sound amazing to jump on and very describable. Could you maybe tell us what kinds of tricks you can do on your trampoline?!
Hey Daisy,I'm Jasel and I attend Glenbrae School. I came across this poster and it caught my eye instantly because of the title and the picture you added. Once I read your poem about your trampoline, I was amazed. This tells me a lot about your trampoline, the scent,the texture and how bouncy it is. It seems like a fun trampoline, keep up the great work Daisy.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this brilliant feedback.You seem really good at comments,me im not so good.How did it catch your eye? Was it the colour? Title?.And yes it is a fun trampoline.Thanks Daisy
DeleteHey Daisy your trampoline sounds like a lot of fun
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Hey daisy,iḿ Genevieve from glenbrae school.I realy like poster, i really like your pictures. there lots of detail.Good Job
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Hello Daisy my name is Taijah from Glenbrae school and I really enjoyed reading your blog post about your trampoline:) wow keep up the really great work.
ReplyDeleteHi daisy Marshall here from glenbrae school.
ReplyDeleteI really liked reading your post it was so inspirational and really cool.
Well done:)
Kia Orana Daisy -
ReplyDelete- this piece of writing was pretty small but still made me a bit happy. Trampolines is one of the first things I go on when I'm told to go outside. Great work !!
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Hello Daisy I am a year 7 student at Glenbrae School. I really like this blog post you have published about your Trampoline. Are Trampolines your favorite thing to play on or do you have other fun things you like to do. Keep up the great work.
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Hello Daisy, I'm Tiara from Glenbrae school
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing piece of work presented by you based on trampolines. It makes your trampoline sound amazing to jump on and very describable. Could you maybe tell us what kinds of tricks you can do on your trampoline?!
Keep up the great work Daisy!!!